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 Should be the main group, management requirements and arrangements, this group of seven law job to me to be a comment. As the 7 laws on any subject, content, more diverse and can not be compared with each other, comment difficult. And because I Caishuxueqian, reviews may not be able to do in place, or more accurate, so if there is inappropriate, please understand, I also work with comments, speaking superficial understanding of some of my poetry and some knowledge in the hope to give reference. If the Notes 1

Landrace line

Septasyllabic * Xiu

haze cage hidden mountains, rain pine amber incense. Shu Yu Nagareizumi sound

sent away,bailey UGG boots, moss covered rocks birds as a bed.

put sliced the cliff into the sky, water, limestone, broken into the earth Township.

odd Herbs often do not mention war, different flower bucket Yan Jing Chuan Fang.

law should belong to the scenery of this 7 poetry, how beautiful the image of the scene the main emphasis on the subjective feelings of attachment again in the scene where. .

Under the new rhyme, meter is no problem. Language, using words, the best to every word used in real office, from the sentence in the hazy mountains Tibet mountains cage Xiu possession, possession of what, if it is Xiu (hole or holes), it is unnecessary duplication. Second Contact: Shu Yu Nagareizumi sound sent away, moss covered rocks birds as a bed. This joint is quite good in comparison.

triple: put sliced towering cliffs, limestone into the water off to town. Put into the sky and neat enough to town antithesis.

put the word out here is hit rhyme

hit the rhyme is in place the arrangements used Chek received the same oblique tones and vowel rhyme words

7 Laws of the Arts Centre, Union general in the middle of the second, ideological center of the second joint in the head and tail. Even the middle of the second joint work on the stability requirements, a joint scenery, a joint lyric, or a joint virtual write, write a joint real, must not four parallel. Sum of two linked together through the middle of the second to complete an ideological concept departure.

this is usually transforms the structure or a conjunction, the two joint undertaking, rendering triple, quadruple transforms.

In contrast, the relative structure of this poem a point on the tile, the lack of ups and downs. Results sentence plain, less taste. The poem focuses on describing scenery, have a certain image of. However, relatively poor expression and rhetoric, the lack of discussion or rendering, mood tend to be unusual. 66.

a pregnant moon 2

Septasyllabic * First Emperor Looking back on board the ancient Highland

Xianyang, Qin Shi Huang Lung Poon here.

glory ambition level of the six countries, severely depleted thousand lines of tyranny.

biblioclast Nanzu China tiger, shut up Hekan officials like the wolf. Mock not the ancients

more unwise, and now still have A room.

rhythm of the 7 Laws were no problems, although the board appears to plateau with rough look back crowded ancient rhyme Xianyang suspect, read it fluently. Yun is the sentence squeeze 246 position, or center of gravity syllable words rhyme with the vowel of the word with the use of language proficiency and on the relatively sophisticated.

a joint to look back from the Xing Tang Plateau, the second line started. Basically the sum of two linked together through the middle of the second to complete a thought together describe the concept of the Second Emperor Ends the

problem subject a bit unclear. Why? Second Contact: Treasures ambition level of the six countries, severely depleted thousand lines of tyranny. The author wants to achieve by comparing the effects of ups and downs, but this joint a little tension on the emotional tendency is too large, in the end is the denigration praise easily lead to ambiguous topic

85 points.



afar the moon 3

Septasyllabic ---- singing colorful painted red

pack makeup, my year old play clothes.

looks deep bead ink, the zygomatic cheek pale apricot yellow.

crested arrows child tight percussion, violin water long tail. (Note 1) (Note 2)

the wrist and fingers that secret, Tiemei Shuangbin write vicissitudes of life. Crested percussion

Note 1: This refers to the opening drums of opera called Phoenix nodded, arrows sub: command of Peking opera musicians with the tools.

Note 2 tail is the violin strings violin bow,Bailey UGG boots, water is flowing West opera singing. Violin bow made with the cauda equina.

Qi Lv ---- singing, Oh, Oh, the poetic rhythm of the special theme, the

language not flawed, deficiencies, such as a joint, inter-supposing not Fengshen (smooth)

structure, the whole poem a casual sentence of three pairs, the total force from and belongs to a joint essay, 234 to undertake the two together side by side together to undertake a slight gap. May be linked to a reversal of the position up and down together, then will be better linked to the triple point 2, there is no obvious context, the overall singing in writing. Mood, the description of delicate, with a certain image of nature, is intended to slightly less than enough. Although Sang year old plays and writing the vicissitudes of life such as emotional account.

76 minutes

colorful clouds 5

Septasyllabic * Ji Yuan

flowers and leaves and the Dragon Boat Festival, hundreds of millions of Shenzhou drink busy.

honey threw rice dumplings into the case of Jiang, Ai Hong Yu tripartite home.

Miluo storms Millennium Bay, Qinchu ancient sword War.

a Lament come for Chang Putian emotional poet.

point of this poem, I will speak about the image of the general concept of the image are three: the image of poetry masters. Poetry of the image, poetry scene in the course of things, the image of things. Expression regardless of how the image of the situation all the Scenery is language, which is the theme of emotional service. The law is the more common 7 nostalgic themes, nostalgia can be celebrated before, you can allegory now, you can alert future. Comparison of colorful clouds because of hard work, the song is a relatively weak point, I take this verse to say a few words.

retro theme to a new is a bit difficult, but also how to arrange the image of the three representatives. The main target of offering, sacrifice or the process, the idea of rhythm in this poem is no big problem. What, then language is love in all languages, etc. King, language has been lacking. Not detailed enough, such as the hundreds of millions of Shenzhou Shenzhou drink hundreds of millions of millions of busy modified Shenzhou, not quite appropriate, should be the normal expression of hundreds of millions or hundreds of millions of Shenzhou Shenzhou honey, do not you throw rice dumplings into the case of Jiang, Ai Hong Yu tripartite home. This is the song in the scene do things in the process of the image. In order to woo three obvious rhyme, the three parties, huh, huh. And the angle of Mary Help of Christians was not good enough three, the focus in the construction process the image and the image of mixed ownership structure described as a mood in the service, flowers and leaves and flowers and leaves only the description in the Dragon Boat Festival Dragon Boat Festival view is, however, the theme has little to do. Triple rough look good, but the service center is not clear enough. Structure is stable. . The poem does not have a clear picture of the division of territory, no new intention. 70



red rhododendron 6

Septasyllabic * Yun

spring breeze blow Drizzles ridge, Liu Shu open eyes from the Yang Yun. Rain fly days

stained apricot, peach fragrant cloud of water passing.

oriole duet find beauty, Ziyan title clay fill existing homes.

Miles Chunchao Qi surging, Rivers surf make garden.



rhythm is no problem. Language, Here, Yun Yang is straightforward from the ranks Yang Yun

is straightforward from the ranks of finding beauty,

poem focuses on scenery, though flawed, description is good. Structure is relatively stable, ups and downs is not enough. Point problem occurs because the junction period, resulting in the poem the King but no good mood 68 minutes





blue eyes 7

Septasyllabic. Wang Qiang

Xiangxi and female reputation Fang, Hui-Lan Xin mass public breaking of Yang.

Emperor hard to the wrong side of the Word, Gong Wei Italian bleak for several years.

children for the United States resigned itself Hu Yi, Xian hate painting monarch feign surprise.

Zhawen sad song off the Italy Yan, Shu Qiang Wang Nian An fifties.



rhyme the word out on the illegal, reputation Fang, rhymesters word out. 2 United antithesis neat enough, but the causal pair, a little taste associated triple on the expression of a problem. Wu Yi children find themselves the subject of US-speech conversion, easily lead to ambiguous structure, the water notes down, rendering the actual situation or not, carried out in turn four joint cooperation, the four on the joint good, the second line of partial implementation, of the Italian sentence must never . But the poem the image of Fei Ming, the author's feelings or are doing relatively well. 75.

Red Bead Recluse 8

operations:

Qi Lv, a night of questions

drunk nights cool shallow pond, look for poetry coming from Mu Cream month.

Zhao like having a few wild crane habitat, and a slight depression on the cold bed.

firepans try to pick out, such as beans, Midnight Cry hate is young.

round-off dream boat any day, convert a small Villa in Wonderland!

basically pass the poems rhyme, and Language,UGG boots, pick the best of 3 Union and the antithesis not Cry neat. And fright does not seem appropriate, and great for that. Sentence rough look at the issue are not large, but some lack of Fengshen between sentences. Such as a joint, the joint subject pond, shallow well below drunken night seemed cool, but the second line and omit the subject, omitted the subject is often the case in poetry, where it causes the reader to feel the Dayton delay the next structure is good. Mood, the first that environment, it has a picture card the United States, but the language of power is not concentrated, complex images, in particular, there is no mention of how Yixinghuanwei. From next month Hawthorn, Zhao, Yehe to the house cold bed, Deng Hua Italy, by coming from cream (note the older), a trace of Midnight Cry's description of depression and joint final overs, pushing the homesickness, not bad.



snow without scent 9

Septasyllabic * Water Lily

fairy pretty clean as ponds, Cheung Lai-color sultry Bling.

sweet smile greet guests, Jiao Zi distinctly drunk lover.

reserved Yi Qing Yun noble, romantic and subtle fragrance lingering sent.

one o'clock fond good night sleep, Qian, who were my v. best friend.



rhyme of the poem is no problem. Language, Lai color sultry little vulgar, and Bling Cheung source is not implemented. Popular slightly drunk lover, lover the word has not implemented, in the end what may be the heart of the look a gift horse, the reader no way to grasp. Duplex Far above the triple meaning people over the lens, not attached to the. The poem written by the anthropomorphic, noble fairy image, but unfortunately with the point of saying, and too straightforward point. United turn tail adult subject, write the feelings off. To Only be a reference point in the conversion, Oh, good character who unfortunately points Qian and ending 70 minutes Q & A

Xiyan 10 View of the Expo felt

Ye Yin-hua fire tree

East, colorful makeup with Sheng. Treasure of the DPRK

pump fresh goods, the guest wins friends gather application Township.

lay Fuwa Haoxiong building blogs, Hoi Po Yin and music books.

likes to watch the Dragon Peng wings, the more ambitious dry Court King Kang.

this poem rhyme is no problem. Language, citing too many idioms, such as joy, colorful. We generally avoid idioms and other poems, have their own language, the best poem you can later pick into condensed into a phrase or idiom. i Pu Township, palms together to apply for the suspect. Triple, carefully read what, from punctuation to analyze, neat and in need of improvement.

Poems of the Pay attention to legal fine poem, which is on the tone, syllable, dual-depth study of the gradual, law has developed to a fine sparse leniency. The poem structure with minor scattered, tile. Although the context of fairly clear metrical clarity, but the language of ideas not Fengshen. 72.

sunset 11

Septasyllabic * Pear ghost

Thriving Hong dust blown off, a long thin shadow stray paths.

Your face into the past yesterday, tonight Yan bone hidden past.

language from the crazy people desolately tears, drops of Acacia taste alone.

ray ghost difficult dream, whom haggard whom injury?



metrical this poem is no problem. Language, not the implementation of a long thin shadow image. Yan-bone when the word pour. Second, better joint tension. Written in the past and present, describing content increased, the vicissitudes of life into the past and hidden, but also increased the emotional ups and downs. Triple, in the pear and self-transformation is not clear, and not enough parallelism, such as artificial flower, meaning to write too strong, such as write their own, the context of fracture. The poem structure fair. Mood, the hidden bitterness of feeling through the paper out of the junction is also good. 76. 12 Wisteria

January

Septasyllabic miles

a sleeve breeze blowing, leaves thousands Pina Dance thin clothes. Gui-Jun

soul should bring the Old Testament, chrysanthemum tea wine fermented grains ask away sad. Xiao Su Jian

Guihong be Italian, who is lonely Candle pity makeup?

drunk a thousand miles a thousand miles on the line, ends of the earth were wandering around!

rhyme, the Rhyme the word Language, the antithesis is not enough work in the triple. A joint use of personification, quasi-physical way, but mix the two, and not very appropriate. Finally, I figured out the meaning of a joint is the express wish of the meaning of leisure 天涯共此时 or the moon, but not clearly intended to express. Recommended subject changed a bit, and I see the poem may not be thousands of miles on the theme, nor is it thousands of miles on primer.

reference Review:

ray sleeve breeze blowing, leaves thousands Pina Dance thin clothes.

Gui soul brought me to be the Old Testament, chrysanthemum tea wine fermented grains ask the new martyrs.

Guihong no mass Sujian Italy, Candle should pity the lonely makeup.

drunk a thousand miles a thousand miles on the line, who were wandering when the Cape?

7 句 problem with the sentence still a lot of special, huh, huh, reference only





the apartments 13

Septasyllabic travel clouds Kwu Tung

quiet gate cover scenery, deep berries blessed incense. Valley Dragon Boat Festival

bright flowers, fairy Jixia ice bed to sleep.

Millennium penholder to be poet, four hooks of silver, welcome sun. For hospitality

Higurashi monk, he BAUER Church in Hermitage.

Note: Beacon Hill, a large crescent, a small crescent, white fairy bridge Kwu Tung four King. Kwu Tung

clouds beyond the Great Wall, commonly known as Chaoyang Dong, Bai Yun Canyon. About 130 kilometers from Chengde City, located in the south of Fengning County Lianhua Mountain in south Beijing, red tiger Shiha railway station, in the Great House to the east side of Tiger Shiha road, more than 120 kilometers away from the Prairie Village. Ancient Cave Baiyun a total area of about four square kilometers, is 400 years of architectural history with brake Po Temple where monks. Kwu Tung area surrounded by mountains, peaks everywhere, cave clouds, canyons Yousui, Labyrinth thousand fold, pines trees, flowers and diffuse slope. Nature's God pen, sketched out year after year, the spring crimson shade; summer double waterfall of diarrhea; misty autumn Fei; winter icicles hanging wonderful picture.

metrical, the deep Tibetan word, the Dragon Boat Festival Yun Yang words are suspected of squeezing. Language, two Want to re-arrangement of two linked antithesis does not work.

reasonable, since they travel, it is always clear season, the second one Jixia United First Dragon Boat Festival, Jixia the end of the summer Well, King does not exist here, regardless of which virtual write. Or remove the title of the proposed travel words. (But he does not fit the tail together.) The last joint, the upper and lower logic will not ring true. Sometimes, we can consider the image of logical thinking into thinking, or emotional thinking



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climb

days of high winds and tsunami ape sad, For white birds fly back to clear sand.

boundless Xiao Xiao Lamu, the endless rolling to the Yangtze River. Autumn regular guest

miles, a hundred years on stage alone and sick.

hard fan hate bitter frost temples, down and the new stop of liquor cup.



sick here a hundred years to prepare, this is a life, life, sick sick life



Notice 8-word poems

: law, truth, election, smooth,cheap UGG boots, hair, close, turn, heart. This character can be divided into four levels, the entry for

rhythm into the Order of the shoes are no shoes, no entry.

poetry lyrics, you need to really need is reasonable, this really has two aspects: King real and true love.

paint a portrait of Love requires choice. There are two choices: First, your mind sees the scenery for sustenance to write. Second, choose something to contrast with the view of the mood to write.

King and intelligence selected, press format, writing poetry, was careful to write smoothly.

to shun single sentences between the sentence to be smooth.

requires smooth rhythm requirements of the situation and King

smooth

words and discourse to shun

Poems and words hair, another way is very different. Note poem ups and downs, the availability of comparison, allusion, and so to send as King, can be made, for example, the Yellow River flows into the sea, in fact, is the virtual write, you can open up the field of vision, the people close to the very far, the poem is done Results , as when baskets, starting a few shut Results Act, or clap, or dang open, or the tenor of tomorrow wake up, or out of other means, or on the front pointing, or title loan form, poems that are nothing more than white cloud ' resign all to do, not the words to make meaning, meaning not the best of speech 'three only. Results can be King, complex, Code knot, ask knot, knot, and so turn movements: the more you turn the word deeper, or methods to illustrate the color change like movie scenes change. transfer process can not let the audience see the thread of scene changes, the situation turn, God will turn and turn but

Results sentence for sentence service heart

the heart to see the world in poetry, painting the world

poetry first upright. The more gas is more suitable, write poetry can cause more public sympathy. Among the new ideas in the testimonies, send outside lived at bold, all martial arts outside of poems, and practice, learning bar. Comment, I point out that the problem may be inappropriate, we understand Ha, I just also a reader only, but also ordinary fans, and hope not to hit, there is change of Kazakhstan